夕阳西下,断肠人在天涯怎样翻译才有诗意呀

yct01

夕阳西下,断肠人在天涯怎样翻译才有诗意呀
the sun falls at west
the broken heart wanders at skyline

agldacheng

The sun sets down, the sad guy wanders far away from home alone.

hopeknow

The sun westering And one with breaking heart at the sky's edge.

niceview

我合成楼上两位的句子一用
The broken heart wanders far away from home alone but the sun has set down。（broken 表示被受伤的程度，而且是已经受伤，表示出断肠之意）
献丑了！

ellencheng

[元] 马致远《天净沙·秋思》[英译] 冰山、周旋久

[元]马致远：《天净沙·秋思》

枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马。夕阳西下，断肠人在天涯。


“Meditations in Autumn” by [Yuan] MA Zhiyuan


Version I  tr. Bingshan

Withered vines, old trees, in nest e’en crows.
A little bridge, a flowing rill, homes.
Ancient lane, east wind, a scraggy horse;
The sunset glows,
On the wasteland is the woeful soul.  

  

Version II  tr. Bingshan

Wilted vines, old trees, at dusk a rook,
Houses, a small bridge, a babbling brook,
Ancient route, east gale, the bony horse shook,
The sun walks out its nook,
At the end of the world the man wears a sad look.

  

Version III  by ZHOU Xuanjiu

The withered vine, the weathered tree and the crow on bough
The little bridge, the streaming brook and the country dwelling
The ancient way, the westward wind and the horses plough
The sun to the west is setting
O the bitter roamer’s far away from home now

niceview

Version III by ZHOU Xuanjiu

The withered vine, the weathered tree and the crow on bough
The little bridge, the streaming brook and the country dwelling
The ancient way, the westward wind and the horses plough
The sun to the west is setting
O the bitter roamer’s far away from home now
这个最有味道!