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发表于 2007-11-28 10:03:54
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引用第1楼白马西北驰于2007-11-02 15:00发表的 :
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the new state we have just inaugurated is unusual in character, entirely different from the empire of Qing dynasty
[tip: this sentence has some unnecessary words.] My English is poor,but I am very pleased to join this activity.
Let me try it^^
I think this sentence should be rivesd to "The new state we have just inaugurated is unique,which entirely different from the empire of Qing dynasty" |
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