1. (Line 1) This paper introduces a method for restoration of environment-protecting forests. This method is created by Prof. Akira Miyawaki, who is an internationally famous expert in the field of ecology of vegetation.
2. (line 3) The theory of vegetation ecology is ….applied to….
3. (line 4) 删除It stressed that,
4. (line 6) This method has been successfully used (删除for) nearly 600 times….
5. (line 8) Liaoning province has a low percentage of forest coverage, therefore it is difficult …..
^_^,给点意见,楼主参考哈
1 created 应该用 established,很少用created initiated之类的,基本上established千秋万载,一统江湖。
2 internationally famous 应当为 international,不管是famous还是well-known都感觉有点别扭,呵呵,而且如果一定要用的话,可能well-known比famous好点,感觉上.还有这句结构可以考虑稍做修改下,去掉后面那个who is.
引用第28楼awperhi于2006-07-11 20:11发表的“”:
^_^,给点意见,楼主参考哈
1 created 应该用 established,很少用created initiated之类的,基本上established千秋万载,一统江湖。
2 internationally famous 应当为 international,不管是famous还是well-known都感觉有点别扭,呵呵,而且如果一定要用的话,可能well-known比famous好点,感觉上.还有这句结构可以考虑稍做修改下,去掉后面那个who is.