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How do We Solve the Taiwan Problem?
Taiwan is a composition which is unable to be separated from China from of old. But it has been separated form the Mainland for 57 years. All of the Chinese people want to unite the Taiwan and Mainland to a whole. However, Because of the different political systems and interest, it’s very difficult to solve the problem. In order to solve the Taiwan problem, many suggestions have been made, such as by forces or by peaceful way. I think it’s the best way to solve the Taiwan problem by negotiation.
There are many famous factories in Taiwan, such as electronic industries and others. The many computers on-lap we used are made in Taiwan. And there are also other products we used are made in Taiwan. Every year, there are large number of products are made in Taiwan. The products need large market to consume them. We all know there are 1.3 billion people in Mainland. This is very large market for products from Taiwan. If we can solve the Taiwan problem peacefully, the products from Taiwan can take convenience to Mainland, and Mainland is a large market for the products to be consumed.
If we solve the Taiwan problem by negotiation, the people in Mainland and in Taiwan all can get benefits, and our country will be stronger. So I think it’s the best way to solve the Taiwan problem by negotiation.

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